Black Shoes and Prawn Sandwich

I lie naked watching her swagger towards me.

'Don't... move... until I tell you...!' she snapped.

The command reinforced by the pointed heels of her black shoes that now balance on my exposed chest.

'What did I say...umm...?'

I winced as the heels pressed and turned.

'Now, open wide you naughty boy ...wider...a bit more...that's good...ready steady go...'

I gag as she drops another handful of prawns into my mouth.

'No more please...!' I plead choking.

'Ahh, what a shame...just...one more teeny weeny prawn sandwich to go...?' she purred.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | January 10, 2012 - 17:58

;-) Liked a lot, Sco Zen.

The words of Dick Emery come to mind, "Oooh, you are awful, but I like you!"

Sand Lady

Denzella | January 14, 2012 - 21:57

Hello Sco Zen

Unusual entry and I almost gagged too at the thought of someone dropping prawns into my mouth. I hate seafood of any kind.

As it is a competition I thought I should mention you have a typo chocking instead of choking.

Good luck with the competition.

ScoZen | January 14, 2012 - 22:57

Hello Denzella.
Thanks for pointing out typo error.
I shall correct straight away.
And another thanks for taking time in reading.
Regards.

ScoZen | January 14, 2012 - 23:00

Sand Lady a thanks to you for your support.

ps I was hoping to see more entries for the comp! It may pick up before the 31st, prawns crossed.

Cavalcaderl | January 14, 2012 - 23:46

ScoZen
Enjoyed poem images high heel
black shoes on his chest!
I don't eat shell fish.
Not prawns.
I too saw mistake choking now corrected.
Didn't like to say .
I can talk! I mainly mispell if in a hurry!
hit the wrong keys!
all the best with the comp; entry.
Might try one later? Have to keep thinking,
in between Ray chat! before goes out snooker matches.
julie x

ScoZen | February 3, 2012 - 17:49

A late reply to your kind comment julie and thanks.
I hope Ray is well and wins his snooker match

L G Meadows | March 14, 2012 - 11:04

Dont you like prawn sandwiches???? ;-)

ScoZen | March 14, 2012 - 17:39

It all depends on who is serving them?