the thorn and the rose

everything goes
everything goes

the thorn and the rose
everything goes

the beat and the ryhme
it all goes in time

the summer beach
and the lake that froze :
everything goes
everything goes

the dawn and the dusk
the shine and the rust
the broom and the dust
the corn and the husk

the sun and the snow
the song and the show

everything goes
everything goes

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | February 1, 2011 - 21:36

wonderful flow - it's like a hypnotic chant

seashore | February 2, 2011 - 08:21

I agree with insert.

Cavalcaderl | February 2, 2011 - 15:13

news seannelson
Yes, I agree with insertponceyfre.
Make a good song.Congrats; Cherry!
repeat flow like a chorus.
julie

Highhat | February 2, 2011 - 16:21

Quite beautiful Sean
;)Pia

SundaysChild | February 3, 2011 - 13:02

I agree- it's hypnotic. Very well put together.

seannelson | February 3, 2011 - 20:38

Well, thank all of you. Nice of you to take note of my little poem.

friendliest regards,

Sean