Doef Thudding Neighbour

By Shannan

Mon, 08 Aug 2016
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Doef Thudding Neighbour

 

Doef

Thud

Doef

Thud

Oh Dear Lord…

Doef Thud

Not again…

PLEASE!

Doef

Thud

My body tenses

An automated reaction

Doef

As anger rises

From deep within me

Ritually repeating function

Thud

Stressing my inner being

TAUT

At the:

Selfish

Thoughtless

Inconsiderate vibrations attacking my wall

My spirit

The sound of hypocrisy resonating

From “worship attenders”

Whose faith-practice is limited to a few hours a week

Thud Thud Thud

Thumping my ears

Clubbing my brain

Raping the bricks

Making me insane

One

Bass

Beat

At

A

Time

 

DOEF

DOEF

DOEF

Accosts my ears

Breaks all silence

Murders all peace

THUD

Assaults

DOEF

Violates

THUD DOEF DOEF THUD

Ending all flow

Of thought

Of calm

Of ability to create

A full sentence

 

THUD

THUD
THUD

Hypocrits

"Ma’am"s slipping off their lips

Eyes that have closed in prayer

Professing a lifestyle

In word alone

 

DOEF

DOEF DOEF

Ignoring pleas to stop

Proving by their actions

Their make-it-louder reactions

Deeds

Colouring their beings:

IMPOSTERS

 

DOEF DOEF
THUD THUD
Selfish

Thoughtless

Inconsiderate

THUDDING OUT

Their lack of empathy

Their lack of respect

Their non-existent concern

Their twisted belief

In broken community

DOEF
My patience breaks

Boiling blood

Bleeding into anarchy

 

Restrained by circumstance

Cuffed in propriety

As my being wants to annihilate

The hypocrisy

The noise

The hate

Sin

 

 

Certificate PG
Poem
Poetry
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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, I am sorry, Shannan. Once it starts getting at you, it gets even more difficult to filter it out at all, I guess. Are any other neighbours affected? I know we once had a neighbour who just didn't realise that loudspeakers fixed to the adjoining wall weren't a good idea, and actually it only really got a problem I think when the parents were out, and so we were able to speak to the son more easily probably! But we were on good terms with them all.

Actually, what does DOEF represent? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Shannan on

You are always so kind to respond.

It's a boarding house I have had to move into for financial reasons and it's the teenagers in the boarding house next door. The girls are quiet but the boys get away with too much... Lots of politics involved unfortunately. Sigh.

The "Doef" is merely me trying to put the sound into a word ... Kind of needs the Afrikaans dialect of phonetics to sound right in its pronunciation.

I hope you are well and loving life. Cyber hugs, Shannan