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I have 588 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 180411 times and 105 of my stories have been cherry picked.
159 of my 4,877 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 165 votes

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Catch a rising fear …

to the tune: of ‘Catch a falling star …’
Cherry

The Softening of Storms

… content in its comfort … Buffeting wind, and howling blast … drenching and scouring … grass glitters … a fruitful life flowing …

on Psalm 121

… For he is there who is my help forevermore, and now. The Maker of the heaven and earth keeps watch where’er I go … [Continuing the idea of a hymn on Sundays]

Around the Round

Spinning on its axis, around to face the sun – back to face the darkness ‘til another day’s begun. Round and round we orbit, every year the same,...

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159 of my comments have received 165 Great Feedback votes

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You do seem to be able to

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015

You do seem to be able to describe his thinking very naturally, and his observations, looking into the water, noticing the small life, and drifting into imaginations.
Then suddenly the tensions, mirrored a bit by his grandad's tensions. It...

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Posted in Jake Mutant - Chapter Four

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Welcome, you are new here,

Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015

Welcome, you are new here, aren't you? You've drawn out an interesting and tender theme here.
I liked the thoughtfulness of  'As the passion that they share Crescendos with great care.'

Personally I would have liked a...

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Posted in The Embrace

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This reminded me of when my

Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015

This reminded me of when my son was being taught about the 'rules of composition' for music, and I worried he would lose what seemed to be spontaneous and individual intuition for what would make interesting sound. He assured me it wouldn't, but...

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Posted in The Discovered Unartist

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Trying to see where you're

Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014

Trying to see where you're coming from in this, PT. It's because of the suffering, death, sin, that God is doing something. I know we would like him to sort it all out at ths moment,  but just like the prophecies concerning his first...

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Posted in Broken Faith

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Stephen, I don't manage to

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014

Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...

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Posted in Shadow Cooking

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Thanks, I appreciate your

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014

Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...

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Posted in No Ties (IP)

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Oh, do plant a willow tree,

Posted on Wed, 03 Feb 2016

Oh, do plant a willow tree, Terry, whoever it weeps for!
As usual you paint a full and interesting picture, full of interesting musical rhymes.
I think we can take some encouragement from some of the 'cleanings-up' that have been done...

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Posted in A Willow Tree

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A picture, somehow of body in

Posted on Sun, 24 Jan 2016

A picture, somehow of body in post-surgery shock, mixed with peace and relief, and a sense of moving forwards. Good to share. Rhiannon

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Posted in Fine

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I liked the title, but it

Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016

I liked the title, but it also reminded me of the power/danger of words written down [Make me a beauty; ugly monster; object of hate; Angel of Death.] which, unless 'fed to the flame', can backfire, as proved by the...

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Posted in A4

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But oh, to have those

Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2016

But oh, to have those memories! A richness not all own.

I was struck by mountains...marathons, and molehills – to thinking things that are molehills to some, can be mountains or marathons to another. Rhiannon

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Posted in Mad Man Moon

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