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I have 516 stories published in 11 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 138407 times and 84 of my stories have been cherry picked.
102 of my 4,005 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 106 votes

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The Ultimate Outcome (IP)

The result of the anger was drinking, which led to a lack of quick thinking … and time to give thought, reflection …

Journey

My life is like a railway – I travel on each day. The bit that’s gone before now for ever’s passed away …
Cherry

Blue Mood Mall

Swamping, dazzling, echoing chatter and footsteps batter, muzak thumping, people thrusting, bumping, alluring displays (plastic pays), austerity...

On the parable … (Luke 11:5–9)

If to a friend at midnight you went to ask for bread – ‘Another friend has come to stay, and I’ve no food,’ you said …

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102 of my comments have received 106 Great Feedback votes

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This reminded me of when my

Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015

This reminded me of when my son was being taught about the 'rules of composition' for music, and I worried he would lose what seemed to be spontaneous and individual intuition for what would make interesting sound. He assured me it wouldn't, but...

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Posted in The Discovered Unartist

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Trying to see where you're

Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014

Trying to see where you're coming from in this, PT. It's because of the suffering, death, sin, that God is doing something. I know we would like him to sort it all out at ths moment,  but just like the prophecies concerning his first...

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Posted in Broken Faith

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Stephen, I don't manage to

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014

Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...

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Posted in Shadow Cooking

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Thanks, I appreciate your

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014

Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...

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Posted in No Ties (IP)

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So sad, effectively told in

Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015

So sad, effectively told in its simplicity and brevity. Is it based on a number of incidents or one in particular? Rhiannon

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Posted in Spilt Milk

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Very sad. I expect if you are

Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015

Very sad. I expect if you are waiting for a possible explanation if feels like it may solve something for you, though probably it wouldn't really make a difference to the shattering bereavement. The 'whether to have a PM or not' must be so hard,...

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Posted in Post mortem results

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It's even more difficult if

Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2015

It's even more difficult if you're talking to someone who seems to feel an obligation to continue, and doesn't pick up on the hints that you feel that you need to go, but you don't want to lie about a committment, but you can't really say, 'I've...

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Posted in Loose Ends

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the action of waves, real and

Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2015

the action of waves, real and metaphoric, haven't got my head totally around the beachcombing. The waves wash away and bring in flotsam and jetsam?
Inprints = Imprints?
Rhiannon

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Posted in Beach

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I don't understand all, but

Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2015

I don't understand all, but then it is a picture of disappearing comprehension, which I am very familiar with, having seen my father-in-law through dementia, and fading understanding, and anger at first, and then a letting go of that, and maybe...

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Posted in The Visitor

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the abyss of your absence

Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2015

the abyss of your absence such a telling phrase in so many situations. Though it does reflect a good relationship that has been experienced. And for you, the shared enjoyment of the details of your surroundings, especially the nature...

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Posted in Opacity of Glass

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