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I have 376 stories published in 9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 72961 times and 52 of my stories have been cherry picked.
28 of my 2,225 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 28 votes

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Rhiannon

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To what? (IP)

They say:
Don’t try to be a champion
unless you get committed,
don’t expect the accolade
unless you’ve concentrated
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Self-Absorbed

“If I could clear my mind, be free
of my concerns pertaining me,
I’d really like to stop and see
what all your suffering might be …

One in Seven

[and they could see that far-off tower on Sunday]

Nurture

A child unchecked in cheek,
or greed, or selfishness,
or one uncomforted in fear
or loneliness,
may live to be a hundred,...

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28 of my comments have received 28 Great Feedback votes

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This is very well 'sculpted',

Posted on Wed, 16 Jul 2014

This is very well 'sculpted', Bee, and the interweaving rhymes heighten the flow. So much unsaid, left to the imagination, including what kind of love could lead to such a parting, and the finality of not being able to yet ask that...

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Posted in Smiling, Waving and Crying

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I liked this very much too.

Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014

I liked this very much too. Concise, but not obscure. Actually, I thought that the rhino's horn looks like a pointed bone, so poetic licence! Particularly liked 'Labouring body lumbers' alliteration.
and...

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Posted in Thandi

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Well put, Taris. I think I

Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2014

Well put, Taris. I think I would add that the desire to obey God needs to be there, though if it is really there then there will be a realisation of the need for his help to do so, and for his forgiveness of the constant failings.
There is...

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Posted in Burning Bridges

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You leave us with wondering

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014

You leave us with wondering about the background to this. Rhiannon

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Posted in White Walls Of Hope

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This is very touching, real

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014

This is very touching, real and vivid. The slow bereavement, the mind swimming about, but not agitated. The brevity and conciseness and form helps. Rhiannon

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Posted in For Ann

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Some lovely threads, and

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014

Some lovely threads, and detail again – so much beauty out there to see and feel, and you share and beckon us to look! Rhiannon...

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Posted in Poetry and That

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good rollicking rhythm to

Posted on Wed, 18 Jun 2014

good rollicking rhythm to this fun rhyme. Rhiannon
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Posted in Shaggy dog poem (with space aliens)

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It  is the videoing aspect,

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

It  is the videoing aspect, and it would seem the lack of sober trial, and the apparent pleasure and fickleness in accusing and carrying out judgement that is puzzling and shocking. Or am I wrong? Rhiannon...

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Posted in Crime and Punishment

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I'm only able to dip in from

Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2014

I'm only able to dip in from time to time, as we are having a little holiday.
You have given much thought here to bring in quite a number of points unobtrusively on tthe history. Rhiannon
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Posted in "Oh, It's a Lovely War!"

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That last verse seems

Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014

That last verse seems tantalizing – what is she/you troubled about in the relationship/conversation? hope waking manages to put the worry to rest?! I suppose it is all up to the reader to imagine? Rhiannon...

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Posted in A Glass of Water

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