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This is very well 'sculpted',
Posted on Wed, 16 Jul 2014
This is very well 'sculpted', Bee, and the interweaving rhymes heighten the flow. So much unsaid, left to the imagination, including what kind of love could lead to such a parting, and the finality of not being able to yet ask that...Read full comment
Posted in Smiling, Waving and Crying
Well put, Taris. I think I
Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2014
Well put, Taris. I think I would add that the desire to obey God needs to be there, though if it is really there then there will be a realisation of the need for his help to do so, and for his forgiveness of the constant failings.
Posted in Burning Bridges
It is the videoing aspect,
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
It is the videoing aspect, and it would seem the lack of sober trial, and the apparent pleasure and fickleness in accusing and carrying out judgement that is puzzling and shocking. Or am I wrong? Rhiannon...Read full comment
Posted in Crime and Punishment
I'm only able to dip in from
Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2014
I'm only able to dip in from time to time, as we are having a little holiday.
You have given much thought here to bring in quite a number of points unobtrusively on tthe history. Rhiannon
Posted in "Oh, It's a Lovely War!"
That last verse seems
Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014
That last verse seems tantalizing – what is she/you troubled about in the relationship/conversation? hope waking manages to put the worry to rest?! I suppose it is all up to the reader to imagine? Rhiannon...Read full comment
Posted in A Glass of Water