The Kiss


from the ABC set Poems

the kiss was light
like spring air—

only the arc of our lips
grazed,
touched,
fanned,
frisked,
stippled,
skimmed,
nipped,
nicked,
pawed at,
shook hands with
each other

like two eyelashes—!

And . . . yeah . . .
I don’t know.
Who cares?
It was nice.

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Comments

fatboy74 | July 12, 2011 - 09:10

Love this.

Highhat | July 12, 2011 - 09:17

Yes really good

SundaysChild | July 12, 2011 - 12:46

Pretty

JoseHdz | July 12, 2011 - 19:25

brilliant--and the ending is just lovely~!

cheers,

jose hernandez diaz.

L G Meadows | July 13, 2011 - 06:53

I found this amusing and enjoyed reading! Nice, as a kiss should be.

Cavalcaderl | July 13, 2011 - 14:47

new cavalderl julie
Very nice, and much enjoyed.
Oh! forgot well deserved cherry!