That day we wandered onto a film set -
remember?
Under the arch and through
the bright sheen of the afternoon flickering
off the river, in a moment smothered
in a smoky autumnal Prague, amid trailers,
snaking cables and the tubes of fog,
this world of seeming – glamour's underclothes -
a new scene in this city where every corner
beguiled with lush décor.
Strange to wander behind the flats,
unravelling the clunky mechanisms of romance
as if we were up the magician's laden sleeve
or in a top-hat brimmed with fractious rabbits,
the trickery revealed and underwhelming.
I took a lethargic snap for some album
but suddenly it seemed so onerous to keep
this land of surface - and our affair – ticking over.
Out on the misty ebb of the now drab Vltava,
the composed gathered calm concealing the roil
of the swans' frantic engines couldn't put one over me.

Comments
fatboy74 | September 17, 2010 - 20:36
I was just about to add a poem when I read this steve and now I think I won't bother - an absolute blinder. It is difficult to begin by describing a favourite line as it is hard to see a weak one. Stunning. :-)
Steve Button | September 17, 2010 - 20:41
Wow! Praise indeed fatboy74 - thank you so much.
But you MUST post yours - dying to read it now :-)
Highhat | September 18, 2010 - 14:56
must be a bit of a love poem? Good ;) Great even better than good ;)love travelling with you guys ;)
Steve Button | September 18, 2010 - 15:14
Actually, highhat, it's more of a "not in love" poem :-)
Highhat | September 18, 2010 - 17:03
Yes it is ;)
shoe | February 8, 2012 - 18:38
Thanks to Fb for heading this one up, it's fabulous.
Steve Button | February 8, 2012 - 19:01
Thank you new shoe :-) Very kind of you.