Do you remember that summer?
You - just moved here -
knew no one!
We met;
smitten!
Do you remember that touch?
You shooed a fly
from my brow.
I tingled;
blushing!
Do you remember that kiss?
In the leafy hollow;
the lakeside bench.
Hesitant, brief;
Magical!
Do you remember that love?
It excluded all others;
our eyes only!
So captivating;
complete!
Do you remember that vow?
I vow it still,
I love you,
always will;
promise!

Comments
Yazmin | May 31, 2009 - 09:56
So Short
So Sweet
So True
Thanks for the great read :)
Yaz
threeleafshamrock | May 31, 2009 - 10:48
Thanks Yaz...sounds like a description of me lol;
So Short
So Sweet
So True ;)
Thanks for reading
MistakenMagic | May 31, 2009 - 16:44
Awww Happy Birthday to Mrs Shamrock! Love this Chris ;)
Magic xxx
threeleafshamrock | May 31, 2009 - 17:24
lol thanks magic ;)
Chris ;)
Curse of 222 | May 31, 2009 - 22:55
this is sweet, 3leaf...i like the structure.
good read. good work.
jason
Silver Spun Sand | June 1, 2009 - 07:46
Straight from the heart, this, Chris. I am sure you must have brought tears to the eyes of your lovely wife.
Tina xx
threeleafshamrock | June 1, 2009 - 08:32
Thanks Jason, I call it my 5-4-3-2-1 style lol. Start with 5 words in the stanza and bring it down to one on last line; bit of fun and there is probably an official name for it but I don't know it; I'll have to ask Ewan, Val, Luigi or Jen ;). Thanks for reading.
Chris ;)
threeleafshamrock | June 1, 2009 - 08:35
Hi Tina, there was the usual 'oohing' and 'aahing' but I think she is becoming immune to my ongoing courtship at this stage LOL. Thanks for reading, glad you liked ;)
Chris XX
Biggus | June 1, 2009 - 12:44
Excellent Chris
threeleafshamrock | June 1, 2009 - 15:16
Thanks J. ;)
threeleafshamrock | June 1, 2009 - 15:16
Cheers Paul - I'm in the good books, today at least ;)
Jupiter | June 1, 2009 - 20:27
Very good work and I reiterate Silver's comment, your wife must have loved it. Must be a smiley morning ;)
threeleafshamrock | June 2, 2009 - 07:18
absolutely J. I can do no wrong lol.
Nathan Bednarek | June 3, 2009 - 22:54
Hehe, yes, very sweet. I really enjoyed reading this. Good one, well done.
Nathan.
threeleafshamrock | June 5, 2009 - 07:14
Cheers Nathan, it went down a treat in some quarters lol.