Honeymoon Memories


from the ABC set Lurve Ramblings

Wrap me in Mediterranean blues
and lay me on the Costa sands,
where I may watch the lovers cruise;
the world held in each others hands.

And if my tears, should cause a glance,
let not your first emotion be
of pity that I do not dance,
or share a lovers reverie.

For I did skip, with youthful gait
with one who gladly shared my song,
when caution - in the hands of fate -
made no decisions, right or wrong.

Think not that I begrudge you now,
your time, for it is yours by right.
Nor would I seek to disallow,
young lovers wings to soar in flight.

But let me lie and watch you preen
or prance and pose, as once did I
and bask in loves reflective sheen,
to share again a lovers sky.

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Comments

Highhat | September 30, 2010 - 10:53

I can fully relate to the stanzas here. Thanks- I liked it ;)

threeleafshamrock | September 30, 2010 - 10:56

Thanks Highhat, glad you liked and thanks for taking the time to read and comment ;)

Chris

insertponceyfre... | September 30, 2010 - 15:46

Chris this one has such a lovely rhythm. In the last line - should that be too or to?

threeleafshamrock | September 30, 2010 - 16:38

Thanks Insert; all boys reared Catholics have good rhythm lol....now that I've seen the light, I'll probably lose it ;)

Chris

fatboy74 | September 30, 2010 - 19:55

Great this, no line feels at odds with the one before or after. Wonderful ending. :-)

threeleafshamrock | October 1, 2010 - 12:22

Thanks Fatboy, appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..

Chris ;)