White Mercoledi

Cherry

By the unfolding head

Fri, 18 Mar 2011
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6 comments
 

Quiet warm rain
falling from her
delicately trickling
down his back

Soft silent snow
frosting tips of toes
and chilled elbows
delve deep
beneath the warm blanket glow

And for a moment

the whole infinite open void
of the moonlit room
is filled
with the sound of touching lips
a tremendous silence
booming hearts and racing eyes
closing
swirling
spinning
circles of sighing bliss

A smiling sky
a tender night
for them
only this

Certificate U
Poem
Romance

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I like this one, a lot. (Small typo - should be 'infinite') This, my favourite stanza:- "Soft silent snow frosting tips of toes and chilled elbows delve deep beneath the warm blanket glow" Tina

 

Submitted by the unfolding head on
Thanks Silver Spun... I wrote this about a year ago and came across it again the other day when flicking through my old notebook... thanks for the typo spot... I am shockingly crap with typo's! ;/

ddf

Submitted by seashore on
This is quite beautiful

Submitted by the unfolding head on
nice one seashore

ddf

Submitted by celticman on
I like this.

 

Submitted by the unfolding head on
celticman! dig! thanks!

ddf