After The Rain
By well-wisher
Thu, 22 Sep 2016
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TTHHUNDERR
A
bolt
o
f
light-
n
i
n
g
bolt
o
f
light-
n
i
n
g
little, gentle, ringing droplets
then
falls
the
falls
the
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a wall of water; an army marching
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water scattered clatters rooftops
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but then = ( THE SUN ) = comes out
T H E W H O L E W O R L D
I S F I L L E D W I T H R A Y S
O F S H I N I N G G O L D
and
now
it
now
it
* sparkles * GLITTERS * twinkles * SPARKLES *
* TWINKLES * glitters * SPARKLES * glitters *
* glitters * SPARKLES * twinkles * SPARKLES *
* TWINKLES * glitters * SPARKLES * glitters *
* TWINKLES * glitters * SPARKLES * glitters *
* glitters * SPARKLES * twinkles * SPARKLES *
* TWINKLES * glitters * SPARKLES * glitters *
....like MAGIC...like a fairy thing!
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I really like the structure
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
I really like the structure and rhythms of this poem. It's lovely.
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I thought this really good
I thought this really good too like a painting a really good piece of art with words. Im.surprised there is no cherry on this. This is good.
Stephen d
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