Blood Month

We trudge through the smoke filled field,
the cold and mud of Murrayfield park*;
the camera flash, of wailing candles,
pinning ribbons on the dark.

Huddled, shivering families gasp,
beneath the showers of burning gas;
the night air, thick with furnace smells
or sulphurous fumes of burned-out spells.

Laughing children feed the flames,
a tragic phoenix, poor 'Guy' Fawkes;
dragged out for annual damnation,
and incant the words they're taught.

"See the fate of naughty children,
little ones who play with fire!";
their patchwork creature blazes;
little Libby waves her sparkler.

Another blinding mushroom,
with red fountains, veins the gloom
of a night-sky that's star crowded
like a black loam sprouting crosses.

Boiling soup keeps out the chill
and morphine, made of paper poppies,
clouds their heads with smothering dreams;
drowns out fumes and dying screams.

“And now we hear ‘The March Of The Gladiators’ played
and see the stumbling corpses killed in carpet bombing raids;
the carnival of carnivores and clowns provokes a laugh;
a sentimental centipede crawls past the cenotaph”.

I’d rather wear Bellis perennis in Spring;
famous spring , the womb of the whole earth;
praise the steadfast roots of evergreens
or remember autumnal life, august and common;
Earth anthem or war-cry of chrysanthemums;
the self-immolation of Autumn leaves falling
and the sorrowless sobbing of doves.

Murrayfield Park* = A nearby park where I used to watch Fireworks, on Guy Fawkes night, as a child.

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Comments

shoe | November 14, 2010 - 11:50

Wow! fabulous poem WW.

well-wisher | November 14, 2010 - 13:15

Thanks, Shoe. I think it's important to write anti-establishment type literature because I think we're in a more conservative, right-wing age and I think it's going to get a lot worse before the next big revolution (I mean a 60's style artistic/cultural revolution) comes.

I also think that internet writers, like the ones on ABCtales, could be at the forefront of that revolution.

Kahdai | November 15, 2010 - 13:59

This is a wonderful poem well-wisher, I had to look up about autumn leaves, now thats a lovely line :) & ooh at revolution comment! K x

well-wisher | November 15, 2010 - 20:39

Thanks, Kahdai. I tried to make it complicated, like a T.S. Eliot poem, with allusions to other texts; for example, there's a reference to "Pericles Funeral Oration" in the last verse because "Pericles Funeral Oration" has been used as a model by modern political speech writers when writing speeches dealing with the mourning of the war dead.

Kahdai | November 16, 2010 - 19:58

well thats brilliant! :) what part is that? K

well-wisher | November 17, 2010 - 18:14

In his funeral oration, Pericles says "The Whole Earth is the tomb of famous men".

I changed that into "Famous Spring, the womb of the whole earth" because Spring is celebrated (by poets and artists) and thus could be called 'famous' but, unlike famous soldiers, spring is famous for life rather than killing and dying.

Kahdai | November 18, 2010 - 12:28

Yes I suppose spring is new life and I read a poem once about a mass grave from a war people grew poppies on them.