I'm deD

i DRAW the last motion, I feel the last breathe,
I pause for a moment I hesitate, I'm death
I'm alive im absorbed,
I flee towards a sword,

I know I am reckless
Obliverated, emotionaly scarred,

these little lines
they are not my thing,
Still I say yes,
Im gone with the wind.

Wiped,
Striped
Past
The
Last

tensions between us
...................

Flee

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Comments

Kahdai | July 3, 2010 - 17:39

Hei! I really got into this one! Great dramatic poem Will! :) K

WillSimpson | July 3, 2010 - 23:34

wooh, dont even remember writing this, lol,

Kahdai | July 4, 2010 - 13:48

even more well done then!