i DRAW the last motion, I feel the last breathe,
I pause for a moment I hesitate, I'm death
I'm alive im absorbed,
I flee towards a sword,
I know I am reckless
Obliverated, emotionaly scarred,
these little lines
they are not my thing,
Still I say yes,
Im gone with the wind.
Wiped,
Striped
Past
The
Last
tensions between us
...................
Flee

Comments
Kahdai | July 3, 2010 - 17:39
Hei! I really got into this one! Great dramatic poem Will! :) K
WillSimpson | July 3, 2010 - 23:34
wooh, dont even remember writing this, lol,
Kahdai | July 4, 2010 - 13:48
even more well done then!