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from the ABC set Blind Wisdom

Glittering hope is contained in our hands,
Left For the fire,
Right to make a stand,
Lightning from the right palm,
Can you see it in your hands?

It starts with a mountain of four,
Seven Sea's and a break, with a fall,
A tree with a fruit,
With an eye from a crow,

I care less now about the words,
Its the meaning I need,
You don't see it when your in the herd,
The words I mean,
My Deliverance comes in dreams,
But my world is like one,

A sweet bird song,
Or an Ex texting your phone,
Do what you will,
But my activities I can't condone,
Its peace I need,
The type you find when your all alone,

You always want your opposite,
Even when I can't see it.

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Comments

Kahdai | July 21, 2010 - 15:00

Aaw Will, I think I understand this, its th meaning ii need too! Kx

jennifer | August 14, 2010 - 23:00

Some great imagery, especially in the first line!

However:

'You're' rather than 'your' - if you can say 'you are' then 'you're' is the one you need.

And an apostrophe is never used to indicate a plural. ('Seven Sea's'), but it is used to indicate a letter missed out, you need one in your 'Its peace...'

J x