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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | House of Cards | jennifer | 10 | 1 year 7 months ago |
| Story | Flight | jennifer | 0 | 1 year 7 months ago |
| Story | Walk With You | jennifer | 7 | 1 year 7 months ago |
| Story | The winter of the frogs | queen beatle | 4 | 1 year 7 months ago |
| Story | Absolution | jennifer | 2 | 1 year 8 months ago |
| Collection | Hurricane Warning (2025) | jennifer | 0 | 1 year 8 months ago |
| Story | The Mulberry Bush | Stickleback | 1 | 1 year 10 months ago |
| Story | Mad Girl’s Heart Song | jennifer | 8 | 1 year 10 months ago |
| Story | Anxiety Rules | jennifer | 17 | 1 year 10 months ago |
| Story | Growing Up - Competition Entry | Caldwell | 3 | 1 year 11 months ago |
| Story | Butterflies | jennifer | 5 | 1 year 11 months ago |
| Story | The Crow | jennifer | 2 | 2 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Bleeding Rainbows | jennifer | 7 | 2 years 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Leonard & Co-hen | Ewan | 3 | 2 years 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Tiredness (A Sonnet of Sorts!) | jennifer | 3 | 2 years 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Another Art (Villanelle-esque!) | jennifer | 0 | 2 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Watching | jennifer | 8 | 2 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Poppies | jennifer | 8 | 2 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Last Train | jennifer | 19 | 2 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Memento Mori | celticman | 24 | 2 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Red Kite (bird of prey) | socialeaf | 18 | 2 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Superstition | jennifer | 8 | 2 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Unsaid (A Villanelle-ish) | jennifer | 8 | 2 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Tilly cut loose from the day | celticman | 21 | 2 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Titterstone Clee (533m)16/02/24 | Rhiannonw | 10 | 2 years 6 months ago |








This line,'Counting out an
Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2008
This line,
'Counting out an abacus
of small conceits'
is just perfect.
As ever, I am going to ask for punctuation all through - your use of it and capitals is rather sporadic, I feel!
Read full commentPosted in The Mulberry Bush
Great poem, but I feel the
Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2010
Great poem, but I feel the word 'invigorates' doesn't fit - it makes the line have too many syllables and throws the rhythm, which is otherwise pretty uniform, off. How about finding another word that means the same thing but has fewer syllables? J...Read full commentPosted in Sun's role
Mad, exhausting,
Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2009
Mad, exhausting, intense! You captured such a crazy feeling! Once again, just the 'it's' to point out, Yes, keep writing! J xRead full commentPosted in Lost in New York - Pt II
'the rain battered box gift
Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2008
'the rain battered box gift wrapped' such a vivid image of the coffin. This is minimalistic, and yet says it all. And for once, I think the lack of puncatuation adds to that.Read full commentPosted in One Driver Escaped Uninjured
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