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StoryMemories from Falls Past marandina193 years 9 months ago
StoryThe Last Door marandina193 years 9 months ago
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StoryVariations on a Poem Read at My Mother's Funeral Kilb5083 years 9 months ago
Storyby Craven Arms Rhiannonw203 years 9 months ago
StoryWho can go into His presence? Rhiannonw43 years 9 months ago
StoryGuard!! Rhiannonw183 years 9 months ago
StoryChinese Water Deer skinner_jennifer103 years 9 months ago
StoryIn The Winter Woods hilary west63 years 10 months ago
StoryThe Last Room mark p23 years 10 months ago
StoryYou Never Know skinner_jennifer293 years 10 months ago
StoryJustification? Rhiannonw83 years 10 months ago
StoryInteresting Times skinner_jennifer143 years 10 months ago
StoryHunsbury Hill Country Park marandina173 years 10 months ago
StoryAbove Old Downton Lodge Rhiannonw153 years 10 months ago
StoryFish Finger Maths! Rhiannonw133 years 10 months ago
StoryOnly The Lonely skinner_jennifer113 years 10 months ago
StoryMallow Pink onemorething93 years 10 months ago
StoryIn Lucid Dreams skinner_jennifer353 years 10 months ago
StoryPreparation Rhiannonw83 years 10 months ago
StoryIn the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six) marandina153 years 10 months ago
StoryDancing Where The Fairies Dwell mcscraic113 years 11 months ago
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Cherry

Vincent

I saw you in a flower, The brightest, sunniest one there is. I saw you in a landscape, So green, so yellow, so ever blue, With red-rooved houses and...

The White Orchid

'The White Orchid' was a popular club, a bit of a dive in truth, but here you could pick up plenty of pretty girls, all at a price. Lily-Rose, Yvette...

Patsy

Patsy perched on a bar stool, A one-night stand for someone lucky, Someone lucky enough to stare into those deep green eyes That have seen so much...

Summer Rain

I hear the pitter-pattering of the rain, And see pellucid drops falling like pearls. And in the distance a roseate suffusion Is behind verdant, green...
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Lanterns on the Lake

It was extremely quiet in the house. Susan Deverill had always appreciated that; trying to write the final chapter of her new book had given her...
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189 of my comments have received 191 Great Feedback votes

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HI,

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022

HI,

Nice little economic poem, Rhiannon. Lovely use  of colour, it has its own magic!

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Posted in Afterglow

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Hi,

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022

Hi,

Metempsychosis is always an interesting idea, but alarming if one becomes a rat !

Well written as always and quite charming.

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Posted in The Last Wish of Christmas

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hi.

Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022

hi.

Enjoyed reading this reflection. How many have 'missed the boat'?

hilary  

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Posted in Variations on a Poem Read at My Mother's Funeral

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Hi,

Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022

Hi,

A nice hymnal verse for this day of Christ the king.

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Posted in Who can go into His presence?

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Hi,

Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022

Hi,

Another little gem, Rhiannon. A colourful description. Enjoyed reading !!!

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Posted in by Craven Arms

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Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022

Hi,

This poem is packed with vivid imagery and deeply personal memories. Enjoyed reading !!!

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Posted in Memories from Falls Past

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Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022

Hi,

I don't think I'd trust the devil with his cloven hooves whatever were happening. As for being ruthless in his past that seems par for the course. Enjoyed this piece of fantasy.

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Posted in The Last Door

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I liked this, Rhiannon. Nice

Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022

I liked this, Rhiannon. Nice rhyme and intelligent nod to Blake's 'Tiger, Tiger'

Much enjoyed.

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Posted in Guard!!

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Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022

Hi,

I really liked this one, Jenny; so evocativve with beautiful descriptions : ' blackberry and gold' was delicious !!!. Unique, abstruse and esoteric.

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Posted in Chinese Water Deer

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Mon, 24 Oct 2022

Hi Rhiannon,

Humourous take on the IP. Where would we be if we took everything literally !!!?

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