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I have 1838 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2554104 times and 536 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1321 of my 12,068 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1359 votes

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Signs of Spring 4)

New life resting, nourishment close by, – or gamboling with the other newborn, zestful infants thrilling with their energy, and thus strengthening...

Signs of Spring 3)

Even in those little tended, sun shines on the garden flower bursts, and in the dead wood floors scattered primroses peep.

Signs of Spring 2)

Hardly noticeable, tiny flowers: if the sawflies don’t arrive and munch (none came last year, so hopefully no cocoons in the soil – must remember to...
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Signs of Spring 1)

Bursting out of tiny bud, stretching up tinged red, greening in the sunlight – power for growth.
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An ever-present help

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Fear of illness, fear of … [take] shelter in the wildest storms. Though he lets foundations shake … one day …
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1321 of my comments have received 1359 Great Feedback votes

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That third verse is

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2015

That third verse is especially lovely, and captures that view. All birds of prey seem so elegant, especially the kite. Is the pic a kite, I thought their tails were always more, or less, forked? I know I'm sometimes puzzled at the 'less forked'...

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Posted in A First Foraging

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I thought it was a dog, but

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2015

I thought it was a dog, but it seemed to be a cat! Liked the digging and the perfume. But wasn't sure about the 'his' in the last line - is it the husband having nine lives or should it be 'your' referring to the cat? Maybe I'm totally wrong, if...

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Posted in The Prodigal

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What a lovely little inciden

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

What a lovely little inciden capturedt! Was it a green woodpecker? I gather they do hammer sometime but my husband used to tell me, if it's the hammering you hear, then it's the greater spotted. He keeps having to turn my attention to it anyway,...

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Posted in Spotted at Dawn

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It's lovely what you took in

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2015

It's lovely what you took in in your micro-glance, refreshing you for the rest of your journey. Rhiannon

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Posted in The A1 Crosses the River Swale

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 A lot to think about there,

Posted on Sat, 21 Feb 2015

 A lot to think about there, and well written of course. How difficult to live with great skill, humbly and kindly. Rhiannon

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Posted in "All the World's a Stage"

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I can only say, how

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2015

I can only say, how compassionate and caring the staff are where my father-in-law is. (and it is just a basic nursing home, largely council funded, they have recently introduced a very minimal top-up and of course there is always means testing)....

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Posted in Room Six - Tooting Bec Asylum...1982

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I really liked the way you

Posted on Tue, 03 Feb 2015

I really liked the way you slipped in the descriptions of the garden eg ' the smell of pine as refreshing as a bucket of snow, needles crunching underfoot.' That whole paragraph seems to have so much vivid description just tucked in...

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Posted in uncorrected proof two.

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Horrible, Bee. Getting

Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2015

Horrible, Bee. Getting callous like this to animal suffering, must so easily lead to callousness to human suffering too. Rhiannon

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Posted in Giving Them a VOICE

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A lot of concentrated vivid

Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015

A lot of concentrated vivid images here, and memories, and the contrast of attitudes to danger and hurts. Specially liked the first verse, and the lines about the moss. Rhiannon

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Posted in Earth Heart (3)

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Interesting cameo of bright

Posted on Fri, 16 Jan 2015

Interesting cameo of bright memories, a bit like Jolono's recent 'Under a London Sky' memories of the beginning of a courtship. I liked ''Occasion marked: Us and 'Coat-hanger tourists' too. The Brolga Dance certainly sounded...

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Posted in Brolga Dance

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