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I have 1842 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2572784 times and 537 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1324 of my 12,087 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1362 votes

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Remembering Corrie ten Boom

Courage when the Nazis invaded their land – to stay. Courage when offering to hide Jews – pray, pray. Courage when making a secret room – willl...
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Colourful Chorus!

… exciting explosion: explore!
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Of drifting and reviving

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] cf Psalm 85 The fundamentals of our faith bring life, delight, and zeal, With time may come complacency,...

Elizabeth, Mary’s relative

Given a child when past age of hoping – her child would prepare people for the coming Messiah. At six months gestation, her baby leaped for joy in his mother’s womb* when Mary …

Mary, the mother of Jesus

A simple honest girl, probably a teenager, imperfect like us all, but with faith and trust in the saving God was shocked when an angel came to call...
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1324 of my comments have received 1362 Great Feedback votes

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Trying to see where you're

Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014

Trying to see where you're coming from in this, PT. It's because of the suffering, death, sin, that God is doing something. I know we would like him to sort it all out at ths moment,  but just like the prophecies concerning his first...

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Posted in Broken Faith

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Stephen, I don't manage to

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014

Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...

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Posted in Shadow Cooking

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Thanks, I appreciate your

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014

Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...

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Posted in No Ties (IP)

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They all sound unhappy. Can't

Posted on Fri, 03 May 2024

They all sound unhappy. Can't break out of it, maybe convincing themselves that they are happy, and above readily befriending. Never really understood thinking well of others and being outward-looking, friendly, generally helpful?
Is this...

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Posted in Ratface

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Horoscopes can be very

Posted on Wed, 01 May 2024

Horoscopes can be very addictive and is putting trust in something else, not the Lord who only knows us through and through and the future and past, and has created such beauty. The wording of horoscopes can be very clever, but distracting from...

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Posted in Fire, Water, Earth and Air.

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You have an eye and language

Posted on Thu, 02 May 2024

You have an eye and language for succinctly commenting on scenery with clarity. eg the haar backed off, hovering over the sea, watery lemon sun glimmering through.  New green stubble bearded the wintered trees
Rhiannon

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Posted in I AM Joan Collins

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I wouldn't know about all the

Posted on Fri, 26 Apr 2024

I wouldn't know about all the procedures, but it sounded realistic enough. I was amused by 'Kidney bowl made from the same stuff as egg-boxes containing …'

He seems so torn between wanting to be on the side of law and order now,...

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Posted in New Directions (18)

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You enjoy writing poetry raps

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

You enjoy writing poetry raps as much as you enjoy your yoghurt, Bulgarian! Sounds strong! Rhiannon

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Posted in Lactobacillus Bulgaricus or Bust!

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You paint an attractive and

Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2024

You paint an attractive and interesting picture with your words. Personally I'm not enamoured by the vast swathes of rape, which seem to change the traaditionaly scenery into something more continental, but i can see the brightness is enjoyable...

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Posted in Yellow Blooms Of Late May

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Best that it's going to be

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024

Best that it's going to be all our in the open. I hope she's going to be OK, with delayed shock as well as the hammering. Have they taken anything? Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (16)

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