Rhiannonw
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Trying to see where you're
Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014
Trying to see where you're coming from in this, PT. It's because of the suffering, death, sin, that God is doing something. I know we would like him to sort it all out at ths moment, but just like the prophecies concerning his first...
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Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
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Thanks, I appreciate your
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
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They all sound unhappy. Can't
Posted on Fri, 03 May 2024
They all sound unhappy. Can't break out of it, maybe convincing themselves that they are happy, and above readily befriending. Never really understood thinking well of others and being outward-looking, friendly, generally helpful?
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Posted in Ratface
Horoscopes can be very
Posted on Wed, 01 May 2024
Horoscopes can be very addictive and is putting trust in something else, not the Lord who only knows us through and through and the future and past, and has created such beauty. The wording of horoscopes can be very clever, but distracting from...
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You have an eye and language
Posted on Thu, 02 May 2024
You have an eye and language for succinctly commenting on scenery with clarity. eg the haar backed off, hovering over the sea, watery lemon sun glimmering through. New green stubble bearded the wintered trees
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Posted in I AM Joan Collins
I wouldn't know about all the
Posted on Fri, 26 Apr 2024
I wouldn't know about all the procedures, but it sounded realistic enough. I was amused by 'Kidney bowl made from the same stuff as egg-boxes containing …'
He seems so torn between wanting to be on the side of law and order now,...
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (18)
You enjoy writing poetry raps
Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024
You enjoy writing poetry raps as much as you enjoy your yoghurt, Bulgarian! Sounds strong! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Lactobacillus Bulgaricus or Bust!
You paint an attractive and
Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2024
You paint an attractive and interesting picture with your words. Personally I'm not enamoured by the vast swathes of rape, which seem to change the traaditionaly scenery into something more continental, but i can see the brightness is enjoyable...
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Best that it's going to be
Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024
Best that it's going to be all our in the open. I hope she's going to be OK, with delayed shock as well as the hammering. Have they taken anything? Rhiannon
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