The Best
By Richard L. Provencher
Fri, 28 Jun 2019
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living slice of life
is in the ordinary tradition:
a wake-up rush is a
priority to the bathroom--
dad’s working today
yet last in line.
Patience rewards
as morning
hugs after kids
charged to breakfast.
Now off to school.
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Is it meant to be 'bathroom'
Is it meant to be 'bathroom' in line 4, Richard? Rhiannon
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I liked the feeling/picture
I liked the feeling/picture of morning-family rush. I wasn't sure of the meaning of the last verse! Sorry. Rhiannon
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