Feral Child by littleditty

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Feral Child by littleditty

http://www.abctales.com/node/548980

I think this may be from a while ago. It's definitely worth a read - an exciting character (any relation to Jill Dawson's 'Wild Boy')?

I like, in particular, her meeting with the fox, and this verse:

"Feral Child, a scruffy dove with one wing on her
right shoulder and a swag bag of treasures on her left,
looked the swaggering golfer straight in the eye."

Need to lose the dot dot dots though, and replace 'bushes of thorns' with just 'thorn bushes', I think.

Jack - thank you - reread and there are a few too many dotdotdots - will rectify - thorns/caught is a rhyme and i will read again to see which way now, not sure - googled Wild Boy - littleferalditty will investigate further! Thanks for getting me to look at this one again - littleditty

 

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