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Posted by Beeme on June 23, 2011 - 22:24

I know the bottom she says I have seen it.
Her hands fighting to unpeel
the layers of darkness,
battling-
a birds wings rippling the air
scrambling to be free.
Maintaining her own worth;
by counting the clouds in the air
and thinking they mean something.

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Comments

Highhat | June 24, 2011 - 07:53

I like this Beeme- I am sure the clouds mean something

;)Pia

Beeme | June 24, 2011 - 20:15

thanks Highhat, maybe they do :)

Beeme xx

fatboy74 | June 24, 2011 - 20:52

i like this a lot. :-)

seashore | June 24, 2011 - 21:26

particularly like the last two lines, Beeme

Beeme | June 25, 2011 - 09:55

Thanks again Fatboy, really happy you liked :-)

Beeme xx

Beeme | June 25, 2011 - 09:55

Thank you Seashore their my favourite too :)

Beeme xx