It’s too dark,
the curve of your fingers
search the dimensions of air,
flickering…
laced with gold
setting a trail of light.
Which I follow,
like a star-struck moth.
Half-light
Posted by Beeme on March 24, 2011 - 17:45
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Comments
skinner_jennifer | March 24, 2011 - 18:29
Hi Beeme,
I really love this poem, it's really magical.
Thankyou for the magical read.
Jenny.
SundaysChild | March 24, 2011 - 18:32
Lovely imagery Beeme, much enjoyed :)
fatboy74 | March 24, 2011 - 21:05
like it Beeme. :-)
rjnewlyn | March 24, 2011 - 23:59
Yes - small but perfectly formed. Rob
seashore | March 25, 2011 - 12:11
Really good!
insertponceyfre... | March 25, 2011 - 13:28
very vivid - I agree with Sundays
Beeme | March 25, 2011 - 16:42
Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, I'm really happy you enjoyed! :D It means a lot xxxx