4AM stepping out with dog
in my night gown
under a glitter ball moon
owls commented
"oooh look at her"
"she'll get cold"
From the kitchen refuge for the shy
distant lights twinkled
like girls who had been asked
Down by the railway
men marched from right to left
another damn the depression lets do it
another defiant show of lights
But these were no nodding Santas
but orange jumpsuits walking the line
hefting a hammer
glimpsed in strobe lighting
like Soviet steelworkers
thinking perhaps of a warm van
a prawn sandwich
next Saturday's natty spats
and dancing black shoes

Comments
RachelPatricia | December 18, 2011 - 17:13
Good luck in the competition camilla, really enjoyed this - think you need an apostrophe in 'Saturdays' in the second from last line though ('Saturday's), hope you don't mind me saying so :)
Rachel xx
camilla | December 18, 2011 - 20:15
Not at all most grateful. Am using daughters laptop as mine has crashed horribly.
Luly Whisper | December 28, 2011 - 22:20
A vivid snapshot.
Denzella | January 14, 2012 - 22:20
Hello Camilla,
Very atmospheric! I enjoyed it and could visualize the scene as it was very descriptive.
Good luck with the competition.