All the Suffocating Sick Grey Reptiles of the Past



By Esmerelda-O
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I try to remember how I loved you
and how we all suffered here
and how some of us escaped and some of us did not.
There are ghosts on every corner
but there are always more corners.
The fickle wraiths we pass, they whisper ancient truths.
History curls like a sick grey serpent around my feet;
I must step over it and leave it to die.
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another blinder Esmerelda!
another blinder Esmerelda!
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Stunning. Just what I've come
Stunning. Just what I've come to expect from you. Your poetry is deceivingly simple with hidden depths.
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This can be applied to all
This can be applied to all sorts of things; tragedy, war, love, addiction, illness, driving, cooking, almost everything we do requires right-minded acceptance. History only repeats itself because it doesn't want to change. The snake at the end is the sting in the tail that snaps this poem out of the ordinary and into another sphere. Not of an unsound mind at all.
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It's true, ghosts on every
It's true, ghosts on every corner.
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The last line is not needed.
Already in the line, "but there are always more corners," is the last lines implied.
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