Off-beat

I like this, Pia...a certain 'quirkiness' about it and yet, such depth.

Tina;-)

It comes from having a lot on my mind I think Tina
Thank you for reading

;)Pia

Dear Pia,

this is so descriptive and even though it's through
you having a lot on your mind, it brings out the
best in your writing.

I think Tina's right, it does have a lot of depth.

Jenny.

I appreciate your comment Jenny-it is so kind of you to read and tell me your thoughts

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I thought this was really interesting, like your imagery you can spin this poem around and look at it from various angles. Very clever!

Very enigmatic and as maggy says also very clever. Your poetry is so interesting - you never know what you're going to get and I really like that quality, Pia.

Coral x

Thank you very much for your comment Maggy- I just had so much on my mind and this is what came of it- glad you enjoyed. I really tried hard to get it all down- there's still some left up there. Ha ha

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Coral thank you for your words. Glad you enjoyed.

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I am very glad for my cherry thank you. Beats loganberries anytime !!

Well done Pia, 'cheers to unfathomable profundity' I'll second that. :-)

;) Thanks FB- glad you agree...

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Another great one Pia :) well done and on Cherries :)

Keep writing
Keep Smiling :)

This is really, really good. The imagery is just excellent and it seems to have so many layers. As an afterthought, have you heard the lyrics to Amy Winehouse's `I Wake up Alone'? This poem made me think of that too.

`So sick of crying, so just lately
when I catch myself, I do a 180.

A very well deserved cherry.

Thanks a lot Prettyrose

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Hi OTT- I think I have heard most of Amy's music but am not good at remembering lyrics- but I'm really glad you thought of me and her at the same time.

Thank you very much for reading and for your comment...
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Nice!

Thanks Barry

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A really interesting read! I think you're a born poet!

Thank you very much Hidden BtM

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Very nice. You must eat good rice.

I do- thanks..

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Ethereal thoughts! A quality of "just trying to grasp out of the corner of the eye". Nice imagery of the mirror and its hints of infinity. :))

Thanks Mgirl. I also enjoyed your first poem on here..

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I really liked the tone of this poem and particularly the phrase 'Future’s countenance
is present in the mirror'. I can think of so many things that could mean.

Thanks for reading LG Meadows..
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Yes... very ethereal. Almost Gothic in nature :)

Much enjoyed reading this

I like that Maggie- Gothic, eh? well almost.. thank you very much for that comment..

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Really love the short-line structure to this, Pia. It flows really well - would be a good spoken word poem, I think!

Magic xxx

Thanks Magic- nice comment which I greatly appreciate..

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I love the flow of your description - i shall read more in here! x Sarah

I am glad you liked it. thank you for telling me
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