Black and white

'The only devil being
yourself
in this paradise on earth'

- love the ending, Pia! And the description of beauty is brilliant :) Well done!

Magic xxx

Thank you very much Magic

;Pia xx

Dear Pia,

you portray in this poem, all the feelings that we
get on a regular basis, I also appreciate the ending,
because it's so true, the only fear is fear itself,
which is all in the mind. I think I'm going in the
right direction with this? Please put me right if
I'm not.

Jenny.

Yes - I agree with Jenny. The writing is flowing Pia.

It certainly is flowing, Pia. You are still on that roll, most certainly;-)

Jennifer has hit the nail on the head with her comment, and I totally agree.

Tin;-)

You bet Jenny- your got it all right. I'm glad you reminded me so that I shouldn't be too anxious. What I really meant was that humans can be so ruthless towards each other- pure devils. We are not always as kind as we would like to be and you usually only have yourself to blame.
Thanks for reading. Am looking forward to reading more of your story.
L,P and H
;)Pia

Thanks Coral- it really is SOoo nice to see that you are reading- such a reward for my efforts. Really brightens my day even more than the beautiful weather.

;)Pia

Another good one Pia very much enjoyed. :-)

Thank you very much Fatboy
;)Pia