Catharsis

Hi Pia,

I had to look up that word 'Catharsis,' sorry I'm
a bit dumb when it comes to unusual words. I think
your knowledge of the English Language is far better
than mine.

Anyway back to your poem, the pure horror of this is
that to me it is very dark, someone who is in a dark
place. I like the fact that you can write something
dark, yet still make it sound very poetic.

I envy you also that you can write a poem without any
full stops or commas, that is a real art in itself.

Jenny.

A very strong piece and don't you dare delete it, Pia!

I agree with Jenny's every word, Pia;-)

Tina

Hauntingly beautiful - gritty, but very honest. Very well done!

Magic xxx

Jenny- thank you very much for your recognition but really I live in the dictionary and thesaurus. You know for someone with a very sensitive mind like me things can get very very dark at times. It is so nice for you to recognise that and helps me plod on. Of course we all feel like that now and again but I tend to make a big deal of it. Ha ha
;)Pia

Thanks Tina and Magic- you are too kind
;)Pia

definitely don't delete this one

Enjoyed this Pia - strong writing, I sympathise with the urge to delete, it's something I struggle with a lot. It's good to get this stuff out I think - far better than it staying inside. :-)

Thanks FB
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