Faith

Really good Pia. :-)

Excellent, I agree;-)

Tina

Its fantastic one Pia! :D x

Some beautiful words written here Pia, lovely piece.
Congratulations on well deserved cherries.

Jenny.

Great!

Thanks eds for the cherry. I was getting a bit worried but I think I am finding a writing style now. I think so. I hope so. Just love all those adjectives but am not too happy if it all gets a bit too subjective- don't like the I's much so am going to try to avoid them in the future. Anyway thank you again. Am most pleased
;)Pia

Thank you fatboy, Tina, Jenny, Kahdai and Sundaysc.,you are all so kind to comment- I really don't deserve it. Am having a bit of difficulty reading your work lately. I am sure the feeling will return- I hope it doesn't take too long because you are all brilliant writers.
cheers
;)Pia

I agree, excellent. I enjoyed greatly :)

Beeme xx

glad you enjoyed Beeme- thanks for telling me
;)Pia

This is a series of beautiful images, Pia. Especially love the images of the sea and tousled hair! Well done on the cherry :)

Magic xxx

Yes, a really lovely poem. I particularly like the way it's not specific about the reference or focus of the images and the way it can then focus on a feeling, a range of feelings - so, reference is not important, in that one knows where it is and where it takes one and holds one as one reads it, emotionally. Strong and delicate.

Thanks Magic and Animan- much appreciate you reading and commenting.
;)Pia