Kindred Spirit IP

Cherry

By Highhat

Sun, 29 May 2011
  • 2355 reads
36 comments
 

A transient happiness
Wafer thin butterfly kiss
Silk-soft brush of lips
On skin
Light tremble of love
Meeting a baby’s cheek or
Mummy’s wrinkled skin or
Sister’s sweet ageing face
Sugarloaf baby
Such a tender moment
Hello and goodbye
Or simply “I love you”
And "you are a part of my life
That I cannot do without"
A kiss that is so imperative
To a fond understanding
And mutual affection

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Poem
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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Pia, Ooooh! this one made me go all tingly inside. Love... love, love it. Great IP by the way. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Hi Jenny there's nothing like a fond kiss on the cheek (for someone who is single- haha)a lovely cuddly baby, eh? thanks for stopping by. ;)Pia

Submitted by Mangone on
Sweet IP Pia. Congrats on the cherry! Have you heard of the ancient clan called the Klan’o’thi Psychic Hosts? Their kin dread spirits of every type Be they nightmare ghouls or ghosts. In pubs they are so rarely seen They cannot sleep on Halloween On hammocks they are immensely keen In which they hang around in Aberdeen For dread spirits get inside their head If they’re drunk or rest in cosy bed And as Uncle Macalister truly said It’s no fun to be controlled by evil dead When an malevolent spirit is in charge Mischief and mayhem are soon at large And yet morning after tired and pale ‘Tis the poor host that finds himself in jail.

Submitted by Overthetop1 on
This is really lovely Pia. You really are on a creative roll at the moment! Have a piece of fruit from me!

Overthetop1

Submitted by Highhat on
Gee thanks OTT

Submitted by Highhat on
Mangone you almost write on demand! Thanks for your amusing ditty- hehe. I think it very rewarding that you write a poem as a comment- ;)Pia

Submitted by maisie on
really lovely :)

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you very much Maisie- appreciate your reading and commenting as always ;)Pia

Submitted by seashore on
Love it, Pia! One of your best. Coral x

Submitted by Highhat on
Coral- I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for telling me ;)Pia

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is a lovely take on the I.P., Pia. Very much enjoyed;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Tina I am so pleased that you enjoyed and thank you for telling me. I think your IP was very original and very good to say the least- the best one so far !! ;)Pia

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Lovely Pia, I too tingled :) Chris ;)

Submitted by Highhat on
Great Chris-glad you got a little zap...thanks for telling me ;)Pia

Submitted by insertponceyfre... on
lovely!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi pia, congratulations on the cherries, very well deserved. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you Insert for leaving a comment.Glad you liked this one. ;)Pia

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you for getting back to me Jenn. I really appreciate it. ;)Pia

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you very much for cherries eds. ;)Pia

Submitted by Highhat on
"Kin dread spirits " very good Mangone. Thanks for your contribution to the comment box. ;)Pia

Submitted by Cavalcader on
ne Highhat Wow! The first stanza blows me away. A transient happiness Wafer thin butterfly kiss Silk-soft brush of lips On skin Light tremble of love Meeting a baby's cheek or Mummy's wrinkled skin really gorgeous. I was a mummy, don't have a wrinkled skin yet! Babyi is grown up now and m. Well done on cherry! and for the (IP) julie x

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you Julie! I have a lovely cuddly grandchild !

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Well done on the cherries Pia ;) Chris XXX

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you very much Chris- ;)Pia

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Lovely again Pia, always enjoy catching up with your writing.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I am so glad you enjoyed this Fb and thanks for telling me. Nice to see you again- you seem to come off and on. I hope it is going all right with your house selling? ;)Pia

Submitted by ScoZen on
Highhat. Delightful, short and sweet just like a kiss. regards
ScoZen

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
This is a BRILLIANT poem, Pia! Love these lines: 'And "you are a part of my life That I cannot do without" A kiss that is so imperative To a fond understanding And mutual affection' One of your best and a definite favourite of mine :) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Highhat on
ScoZen- that was a lovely comment. Thank you ;)Pia

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you Magic. What a brilliant comment. ;)Pia

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