Love

I call love my 'infinite tsunami'. Dangerous, awe inspiring, exposing and ultimately so revealing of ones true nature. I feel something from this piece.

Dan

Yes Danrama very good- "Infinite tsunami"- thanks for reading and commenting
;)Pia

Hi Pia,
how many words to describe that intimate love only
two people know. Totally beautiful Pia.

Thanks for an amazing read.

Jenny. xx

Why thank you deeply Jenny.
;)Pia

Quite lovely Pia,

I love theses lines especially,

"Unfold the layers of tissue;
Muscle, veins, cartilage
and then, unveiled, the bruised chalk bones."

thank you for your kind comment Shoe
;)Pia

This was captivating Pia - wonderful wordplay and jam-packed with feeling, a great read. :-)

new Highhat
Enjoyed this love poem
very much,intricately woven with
words,and expressions,especially the last stanza.
julie x

Thank you Fatboy and Julie- so glad you enjoyed
;)Pia

Pia this is fantastic and so emotional, like thending best K xx

Thanks Kahdai- I am so glad for your words thanks a lot so pleased you liked it.
;)Pia

I like this poem. It's kind of a mind expanding poem, using language in interesting new ways. I especially liked the line, "a jigsaw puzzled expression" because it provokes you to think about its meaning.

I like the beauty in

"The sensational stormy horizon
left loneliness behind with gusts of wind and raindrops."

I also like how it's neither positive nor negative but more relishing the experience of love both happy and sad.

Wellwisher- thank you for your expansive comment. Much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed. You really did get the tone - Thank you
;)Pia

A very good poem I loved it

DMG

Thanks Magic Girl- I'm glad you liked it...

;)Pia