Safety

Gosh pia,
This is so expressive, it sounds like some horrible
nightmare, when finally she wakes in her bed safe.
Jenny.

Yo she wakes up to safety- thanks for the comment Jenny- like the expressive part- thanks
;)pia

:O Ii thought it must be a nightmare too! or like an old story, glad its safe at the end ;) K

yeah it's best to be safe because nightmares can easily happen even when you are awake ;) thanks for reading Kahdai
pia ;)

lovely read. must say, I read this while listening to Jimi Hendrix's 'Red House'... great experience...

cheers

Thank you very much for the kind comment Jose- nothing compared to your wonderful poetry -
;)pia

Wow what a great idea to read while listening to
Jimi Hendrix's 'Red House.' I'll have to try that one.
Jenny.

I had a strange experience, in my sleep I was running
really fast down a hill and running through peoples
houses, trying to get home, but I was lost. When I
awoke in the morning, my head was buzzing, I felt
like I had so much energy, it was really weird.
Jenny.

Strange Jen- dreams or rather nightmares usually tend to drain one of energy. I suppose because you gathered energy by running down hill- not as demanding as up hill- oh nonsense- I'm very silly
;)pia

Am not familiar with that particular track- thanks for the hint ;)
pia

Firstly - WOW! And secondly, this is a seriously wonderful piece - so gritty and dirty (in the muddy sense of the word!) A living nightmare - but an expertly crafted one :)

Magic xxx

its true! I crawl up mountains and fly downstairs in my sleep!

Wot no crocodiles?

I think I really liked it - but I didn’t. You know what I mean. I did like it but there’s too many things with too many legs and teeth.

xDrew

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well I was terrified all the way through - this was really well done Pia- totally gripping

Well done on the cherry - have you been reading M R James alone late at night? :-)

Magic- thank you for the comment- It's just as good as the cherry
;)Pia

"when you least expect it you're elected- you are the lucky one" I never expected a cherry on this one- but whoever does? Thanks guys and dolls. Fabulous.
;)Pia

Thank you Kahdai for reading
pia ;)

Thanks iDrew for commenting- love your magazine
pia ;)

Insert- I really appreciate your reading and commenting my pieces- yours is quality judgement along with the other talers of course.
Thank you
pia;)

Fatboy- thanks a lot for reading and your fine comment. I am a great admirer of your work so your comment means a lot to me.Nope- haven't been reading MR James late at night!!!
;)pia

Congratulations on the cherries Pia, you wrote a brilliant
piece here, well deserved.
Jenny.

Thanks a lot Jenny and thanks for reading- greatly appreciated
pia ;)

I've arrived at the party late...sorry;-)

A wonderful piece - well deserving of its cherry, pia.

Tina

Thank You for reading and commenting Tina
;)pia

Hi Pia :) Yes very Expressive like Jenny said and you obviously have a brilliant talent and express like, to some as it should be :) although I had to read it twice to understand where you were going with it, that's me not you lol.

So well done :)

I may update it as you are not the only one who had difficulty in grasping the meaning ;) thanks for the kind comment prettyrose- yea a lovely name you have ;)
pia

I liked this poem although I didn't understand it but it grabbed my attention, artfully turned my stomach and made my skin crawl and I like poems that can do that.

I think I was feeling like being a bit creepy well- wisher- thanks for reading- it was supposed to be a nightmare where she woke up eventually.
;)Pia

Your welcome Pia :) and thank you for your kind words, not sure a bout the pretty bit lol some one once told me he he but smile I always try to do so incorporated the both :)

And you did achieve your goal Pia as nightmare and I always say follow the pen within and what you write is not a sin!!! again great work :))))

Thanks for sticking with it Prettyrose- nice comment thanks
;)Pia