Tipped over by a feather

I love this Pia, particularly the second half which meanders wonderfully. Suits no punctuation perfectly - I like how your poems just don't care, they say what they say and fuck all that's come before; that's really refreshing. :-)

I couldn't have put it better than fb, Pia;-)

Another little gem from your pen;-)

Tina

That was a lovely comment Fatboy- really makes me happy about my work.. Thank you very much.

;)Pia

Thanks Tina for reading and your kind comment. I'll sleep peacefully now...
;)Pia

Thanks for the cherry Ed.. ;)

Hi Pia,

this poem has such a velvety feel to it, gentle and
peaceful...so tranquil. It works for me on so many
levels, because it flows so well.

Your descriptions in this poem are amazing, with
words I can only describe as soothing.

Definitely one of my favourites of yours.

Congrats on the cherries and thankyou for sharing.

Jenny.

I agree with all that has been said. A very enjoyable read and some really beautiful imagery.

beeme xx

Thank you so much for your eloquent comment Jenny- made me so happy... glad you enjoyed it and yes I was trying to convey something soothing- so pleased you picked up on it...

;)Pia

Thank you very much Beeme. Really appreciate you reading..
;)Pia

new Highhat
Really enjoyed.
And it;s images, and calming effects.
And well deserved cherries!
Now snuggle down sleep well.
julie x

Wow, I agree with Julie such a calming effect with your trade mark eloquent style. The ending is sheer perfection. What a master piece!

Very good Pia- I just love 'foggy melancholia'

Oh this is just great writing Pia. Completely stunning. It's got the wow factor alright. So glad it got a cherry too.

Thanks Maggy, Sundays and Ott. I truly value your comments. Thanks for reading this one. You have all made my day. I'm so grateful for your wonderful comments.

;)Pia

"and the stroke is near perfection
a blank page
the innocent
an unknown quantity"

- brilliant last lines, Pia. The lack of punctuation really works. Well done on the cherry!

Magic xxx

Thank you very much Magic. Your words are valued.

;)Pia

The word `smooth' comes to mind Pia - I've no idea why - anyway it was a lovely read. x

Thanks for reading Coral- nice to know you are battling through..
;)Pia

As promised, I read another one of your pieces! I'm glad that I did, because this one was a very good one, too! The cherries are muched deserved!

Merry Christmas,
Savannah

And a Merry Christmas to you Savannah- glad you got so much from this one- thanks for reading and telling me your thoughts.

;)Pia