Anyone arrive on earth
would feel this purpose,
angels or aliens or what
maybe somekind of holier
for if not to save them
oh why are we here?
We are not, no holy saviour
we are not angels in disguise,
we are only here try to help ya
yet we cant see between the lies.
we dont have much life to give
yet wouldnt take any from you
dont know how to help
we can always try
O we can try
I still try
so if not a saving angel
what am I?
& what am I doing here?
who am I
and why?
Comments
skinner_jennifer | October 6, 2010 - 18:10
Hi Kahdai,
I think we are here, to be and do the best we can,
to keep human kind going, to live our lives the best
we can and to trust that what we do will effect mankind in a good way, obviously I know there is bad
out there, but we as humans have to understand that
in all things there is good and bad, it makes this
world what it is. If everyone was good it would be
bound to make someone angry, so there will always be
conflict in the world, we are all different.
You I can tell are a good person, so I would presume
that you are here to spread goodness.
You have touched on a very special subject, I think
you are a special person, you should always remember,
that it's not untill you look back on your life, that
you realise what an affect you have had on the people
around you.
This was an interesting poem to me, hope I haven't
spoken out of turn.
Thankyou for bring up this subject.
Jenny.
Kahdai | October 6, 2010 - 18:30
Its for the competition Jenny
http://www.abctales.com/forum/2010/09/29/writing-exercises
that could be yours! K
MistakenMagic | October 7, 2010 - 11:00
Love the rhymes in the final stanza, Kahdai. Good luck with the competition!
Magic xxx
Highhat | October 7, 2010 - 11:43
A lot of questions not easily answered. well done Kahdai
;)pia
Kahdai | October 7, 2010 - 18:26
thankyou both!
fatboy74 | October 7, 2010 - 21:31
I like the voice of this poem and the rhythm. Well done!:-)
Kahdai | October 7, 2010 - 21:36
thankyou! & thanks for reading! :)