Afternoons In The Love Museum

The sleeping head
of a hanged drayman

preserved in a
bell jar.

The ghost of his wife stares
through glass,

the dusty crevices of the
building heavy with age,

the liquid heavy also, preserving
all she saw.

Glistening in electric light
she is no more than a girl.

Her eyes swell at his thought
and touch.

Evaporating sulphurs
of her love

swirl around me and I
lean into the plinth

giddy with the moment,
the sheer weight

and hatred of that crowd,
eager with their shackles

and knives to punish
for his crime.

Giddy too in this strange place -
a love museum -

among the trinkets and articles
of faith

that drove a simple drayman
to kill

and elope into the forest
with his young love,

her father's blood
still warm on his hands -

well-dipped in a
sparkling brook

before he cradled
her in his arms.

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Comments

fatboy74 | February 14, 2011 - 10:20

Really like this Kilb - possession of narrator/reader and the shift in feelings is v effective. Reminded me of afternoons in the Pitt Rivers. :-)

Kilb50 | February 14, 2011 - 10:28

Thanks fb. Afternoons in the Pitt Rivers ? I'll have to look that one up!

fatboy74 | February 14, 2011 - 11:05

It does sound like a great name for a poem but isn't yet (I think). Pitt Rivers museum in Oxford has lots of brilliant stuff like real shrunken heads.

Kilb50 | February 14, 2011 - 11:08

Hmmm...Pitt Rivers sounds like my kind of place!

seashore | February 14, 2011 - 12:08

Brilliant - I absolutely love this poem!

Kilb50 | February 14, 2011 - 12:09

Thanks seashore. My wife asked for a Valentine Day poem and this was the result!

seashore | February 14, 2011 - 12:13

I'd love to know her reaction.......!

jonahs cough | February 14, 2011 - 17:48

this is really great. really enjoyed it.

Kilb50 | February 17, 2011 - 13:02

Thanks jonahs.