Weighing our love

Cherry

By Parson Thru

Sun, 15 Jul 2012
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15 comments
 

You step lightly
onto the scales

And it takes
the whole world
and everything
that I will ever know
to balance you

The scales tip
slightly in your favour

And everything that exists
Every opportunity
I might ever have
Everything I could ever be
rises gently upwards

But here in my world
you are weightless

Certificate U
Poem
Parson Thru II
Love

Comments

Submitted by shoe on
Cool!

 

Submitted by seashore on
I agree.

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Thanks shoe and seashore. Thanks eds. Thanks you know who... (for letting me post this) x

Parson Thru

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Love the metaphor of this one, PT. Great stuff, as per usual. Tina

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Well done Parson - sincerity is often the hardest thing to do well. Really like this.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Thank you Tina, thanks FB. Lovely comments. Glad you liked it.

Parson Thru

Submitted by the unfolding head on
agree with all the above, an excellent poem. Nice one

ddf

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Cheers D. So nice, man.

Parson Thru

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Breathtaking! You had me hooked from the first to the last word, PT, well done! Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Mark Heathcote on
Lovely sentiment and much enjoyed…

Mark Heathcote

Submitted by ScoZen on
I'm supposed to be hard, but this...ahh.
ScoZen

Submitted by ScoZen on
I'm supposed to be hard, but this...ahh.
ScoZen

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Thank you MM, Mark and ScoZen. I am a lucky boy.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Rigel on
Nice one, Parson. You do have such a way with words, and more besides it would seem.

Submitted by Parson Thru on
:) Thanks Rigel. You weave some lovely wordage yourself if you don't mind me saying.

Parson Thru