Lullaby

Hi coral,

this was such a tender poem, it really moved me.

I do hope your health is better, or if not that
it's improving.

It's good to read your pieces of work again.

Jenny.

Wonderful. Enjoyed reading your poem...

Not many words seashore but all of it said very tenderly - I thought it a lovely poem. :-)

Hello there seashore.

"...would you read me a story
with a happy ending..."

Of course I would.

Now...once upon a time there was a...?

Thank you Jenny, Jacques, fatboy and ScoZen for taking the trouble to comment on my `practice piece'...honestly can't remember how I ever managed to write anything of worth but I'll keep trying and perhaps it will come back to me soon.

Sorry not to comment on anyone's work lately - not like me - have been avoiding Abc recentlyas Life has got in the way of art (sorry to be so cryptic). X

Told you so!

Told me what?

Said you could still write and were worrying unecessarily.

Oh right, well you know what I'm like....

Really lovely. A lot said in so few words.

Thanks OTT

And the simplicity and sparseness in this one makes it for me. Gentle yet powerful, less is more. Loved it!

sue

Wow, so pleased you liked it and let me know, sue, as I had a genuine block for about 6 weeks at least and this was a way of easing back into writing. Many thanks for reading my stuff!