My ice- blue body
perfect before
the scarlet
sun thaws me
my bedroom readjusts
in the flurry of
snow-flake light,
flickering black
-brown outlines
a slipstream of
glistening golden light
admires my mirror
dances in its reflection
casting my washed-out
body onto a pastel skyline
each plume-blue-
love-scar dissolving with
the rising sun

Comments
ScoZen | January 22, 2011 - 16:29
ScoZen
Ahh, Bemme
Another one of yours that I enjoy.
Only don't thaw out to soon.
Regards.
fatboy74 | January 22, 2011 - 21:34
Yes Beeme I agree with scozen, I also enjoyed this and am enjoying very much this style of poem (without sounding too much like an arse, I think they call it stream-of-consciousness). The 'plume blue love scar dissolving with the rising sun' is another brilliant ending to a very good poem of yours. :-)
insertponceyfre... | January 22, 2011 - 22:56
me too Beeme. I'm really enjoying your colour themed poetry - wonderful imagery
Beeme | January 23, 2011 - 09:53
:-) awwh thank you ScoZen, I'll try not too :)
Beeme xx
Beeme | January 23, 2011 - 10:25
Thank you so very much Fatboy, you do not sound like an arse at all lol :) Yes, I think this would be a stream of consciousness poem I just looked it up ;) I enjoy writing these types of poems so I'm very glad that you get enjoyment from them too.
Beeme xx
Beeme | January 23, 2011 - 10:25
Thank you so much Insert! I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Beeme xx
Silver Spun Sand | January 23, 2011 - 21:52
It's all been said, Beeme, except well done from me. Wonderful;-)
Tina xx
Beeme | January 23, 2011 - 21:55
Thankyou, so very much Tina! :)
Beeme xx
seashore | January 24, 2011 - 09:44
Yes you go from strength to strength - you have a lovely `easy' style if you know what I mean, Beeme. It reads like that anyway.
Beeme | January 24, 2011 - 12:10
Thank you very much seashore :) I'm glad it reads that way ;-] This one was quite tricky to get right.
Beeme xx
SundaysChild | January 24, 2011 - 19:39
Gorgeous xx
Beeme | January 24, 2011 - 22:06
Thank you very much Sunday! :)
Beeme xx
Kahdai | January 26, 2011 - 21:48
I am glad if your scars finally dissolving, I did like the poems with them though xx K
Beeme | January 26, 2011 - 21:49
awwh hehe, thank you very much Kahdai. Glad you enjoyed them xx
Beeme | February 15, 2011 - 08:41
Thank you for the cherry Abctales x