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Posted by Highhat on October 2, 2011 - 12:25

Don’t drip, ooze your ME
over my I
I don’t want to drip, ooze my I over you.
Oozing my I over ME
and ME over my I
and over your YOU
,I and ME.
Hey where are am I going?
Where are you going?
We can gather our I’s, ME’s
and YOU’s together and meet
at the bus shed and take 301
to town; buy a coffee and
Blueberry pie, talk about the weather
and enjoy the view.
And your I, ME and YOU
and my I and ME
will probably have a splendid time,
all rolled into two
individuals- you and yours truly,
Me-!

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | October 2, 2011 - 14:37

And I and ME found YOU and YOUR poem intriguing.
ME, I and YOU and YOURS can go and have some
Blueberry pie and Talk about the YOU, ME and the
WHATEVERS!

FASCINATING.

Jenny.

Highhat | October 2, 2011 - 17:12

you made me laugh- thanks Jenn- an appropriate comment. Love to have Blueberry pie with you!

;)Pia

oldpesky | October 2, 2011 - 17:26

Has the world went completely bonkers?

Highhat | October 2, 2011 - 17:35

It's balmy Sunday OP- hadn't you noticed? Here is proof!

Cavalcaderl | October 2, 2011 - 17:44

new Highhat
hello! very clever worked
out poem, now I know why?
stopped in to-day?
Thanks julie xx

oldpesky | October 2, 2011 - 17:51

I'm still none the wiser. Think I better go have a lie down.

fatboy74 | October 2, 2011 - 21:37

odd but strangely enjoyable Pia. :-)

Highhat | October 3, 2011 - 05:52

Thank you Fatboy for stopping by.

;)Pia

Overthetop1 | October 4, 2011 - 13:14

Well I loved this Pia. It's neat, quirky and funny. ME being ME, I related to this, which is probably quite worrying. You can pour your ME over my I whenever you want.

Highhat | October 4, 2011 - 13:23

Oh I am so glad that you seem to have understood it and could relate to it OTT- then we have a few things in common. You seem to be the only one who's got it so far.
loved your last piece- right up my alley-

;)Pia

ScoZen | October 10, 2011 - 20:45

Hej HH

I am on a "...301 to town;..." thinking about this one.
Need to have a word with OTT.
Passe pa.

Highhat | October 11, 2011 - 05:46

It was actually meant quite seriously ScoZen but got a humourous twist when it was finished. But thanks for reading.
you pas på også

;)Pia