She lived in a dim world,
just stepped out of a shadow,
into a lighter shade,
all she needed was a window,
to show how much better her life could be.
Everything is relative,
you have heard spoken,
so compared to before,
this wonderful new life
you did anything to get
and everything to keep.
She's the one who poisoned the princess,
she's the one who enchanted the king,
she is the one in the long black dress,
she's the one you never should let in.
All you need is a window
to let some light through into
an otherwise dark space
and if you decide
to let it
shine on your face
you'll see
how much better
you could be.
Comments
fatboy74 | January 3, 2011 - 23:31
Dark and meaningful and a great last stanza kahdai.:-)
seashore | January 4, 2011 - 06:51
This is good, flows really well.
skinner_jennifer | January 4, 2011 - 10:41
Hi Kahdai,
I found this poem haunting, very mysterious.
captivating read.
Thankyou.
Jenny.
Kahdai | January 5, 2011 - 15:57
thank you seashore and Jenny glad if it mysterious even though didnt mean it to be :) fatboy74 thanks a lot coz ii was trying to get the ending for nights! K x
Highhat | February 11, 2011 - 09:00
This poem is very good Kahdai- Yes it flows very very well- not a line out of place
;)Pia