He senses my melancholia –
my marmalade moggy...
Breathe in the essence
of him; pine cones, and
a certain smokiness, like
some distant bonfire. Lame
in one leg...moth-eaten ears,
but home, sweet home,
to his pesky mites.
Stares me out – those eyes
the bluest of things green;
flexes his claws on my knee...
I bleed, but the merest trickle.
If only love was always
like that...It’s supposed
to hurt, I know, but
no more than just a little.
He melts into my lap,
nudging my hand
with his head – his way
of cajoling me to stroke him.
A pair of old cronies...us,
listening to the snow
as, ‘soft, it starts a-falling’.
As good as it gets, this;
of a Christmas morning.

Comments
RachelPatricia | December 18, 2011 - 17:43
Ah, Tina - this is beautiful!
'...those eyes
the bluest of things green'
Can't even tell you how much I love that line!
Pumpkin sounds just wonderful - really, really enjoyed this :)
Rachel xx
skinner_jennifer | December 18, 2011 - 17:53
Hi Tina,
like Rachel, I just wanted to go Aaaahhhhhhh! at
least I think that's how you spell it.
What an amazing, lovely piece of writing.
I adore cats and this gave me such a smile, with
memories of the cats that I've had in the past.
Hope you have a wonderful Christmas Tina and a very
Happy New Year.
Jenny.
Silver Spun Sand | December 18, 2011 - 18:26
Thanks, Rachel...Pumpkin is wonderful. I shall tell him you said so;-)
Tina xx
Silver Spun Sand | December 18, 2011 - 18:29
Hi there, Jenny...
I think your 'Aaaahhhhhh' is spelt letter perfect;-)
So pleased you liked this one. I have had dogs and cats, but I have to say I am decidedly one of those 'cat people'.
Many thanks for your lovely comment and I wish you in return, a magical Christmas and a peaceful and fulfilling New Year.
Tina
Parson Thru | December 18, 2011 - 19:28
Really atmospheric. Nearly went to push the cat (gently) off my knee to lean over and type this. Reminds me of 'Blue' - who wasn't blue. BTW I think the typo I mentioned on the previous poem was in my head - apologies.
Silver Spun Sand | December 18, 2011 - 21:31
Your lovely comment made me smile, PT;-) So pleased you enjoyed, and many thanks for taking the trouble.
And please don't apologise. It wasn't in your head, it really did need that comma, and I understood exactly what you meant.
Hope you have a great Christmas...and by the way, your cat sounds quite a character.
Tina;-)
Denzella | December 18, 2011 - 22:01
I too liked this poem, particularly the alliteration in the first two lines. I also liked your description of the cat using his head to nudge your hand to stroke him. However, for me the line I like best is "He melts into my lap..." The last three lines too are very evocative of a white Christmas.
Lovely poem, Tina. While I'm at it have a lovely Christmas.
Moya
scratch | December 18, 2011 - 23:38
Penandpaperdreams cites the take home lines. A super effort. Thanks.
Highhat | December 19, 2011 - 04:25
I was going to pick out the same lines as Rachel and Scratch- they went right home. Unfortunately I get all sneezy around cats and anyway I think they shouldn't live in flats. Sounds like you are very comfortable together with Pumpkin- beautiful poem Tina.
Have a wonderful Christmas- you and Hubby and Pumpkin..
and thanks for letting me into your poetic world all year- has been a a true pleasure- am looking forward to lots more next year.
;)Pia
Parson Thru | December 19, 2011 - 10:09
Oh he was Tina. Mischievous and very much his own cat. Picked up a lot from his environment.
Have a lovely Christmas and look forward to more from you next year.
PT
Silver Spun Sand | December 19, 2011 - 11:37
Thank you so much, Moya, pleased you enjoyed.
Have a peaceful Christmas and all the best for the new year;-)
Tina
Silver Spun Sand | December 19, 2011 - 11:37
Much appreciated, scratch;-)
Tina
Silver Spun Sand | December 19, 2011 - 11:41
Strange you should say that about getting sneezy. My daughter is just the same, although she had no choice but to take in a stray a few years ago now. She gets round the problem by bathing it each week, or should I say, dunking it in the sink. Apparently the allergy is something to with 'dander' on their fur. Don't worry about her cat though, he's used to it by now;-)
Thank you, so very much for your words, and for your Christmas wishes, and I return the same to you and yours.
Tina;-)
Kahdai | January 18, 2012 - 19:13
I think I would like Pumpkin! K
Silver Spun Sand | January 19, 2012 - 11:20
And I think you would too,Kahdai;-) And the feeling would be bound to be mutual.
Tina
Kahdai | January 25, 2012 - 16:00
:D
Silver Spun Sand | January 25, 2012 - 16:07
;-)