Eating Up The Chaos: Collected poems from the Shanghai

I'm starting a new collection of poetry with MT Mackin Press and would love some insight and feedback from ABCtales readers. The poems are written by me, (an australian living in shanghai)
Photography will be added to the book, as well as illustrations.

Attached are some of the newer, unedited poems, so I don't mind harsh, critical responses!

Lee J Mavin
http://www.mtmackinpress.com
http://www.createspace.com/3446452 (link to my first collection of poetry)