what do u think of this before i start the speach mark are him speaking in his head ok
..... shes dead, "what have you done" he wipes his brow and puts the sharp instument back into the case and calmly walks to the therapist office "you made a big mistake why did you do that" he gets in and pours a cup of coffee and wait for the next victim.
right i have got my story right this therapist kills his victim and chops her up and stuffs her into a sofa (padded) only to find he had left his rare coin in the side of it just before it goes into the crusher the sofa is about to be chewed up but the white van run over the wire for the electric and his rare coin falls into his hands , he depostis the sofa in to the river ............ now what next !!!
I had a similar problem with a short I was working on some time ago megan.
The main character wasn't Schizophrenic, but was under the influences of external and voices.
I found it very hard to separate the voices from the narration of the character
Its not easy to do this well. As I found out the hard way.
Will probably have another go at it though.
The coin! The coin! What's happened to the rare coin ?????
(and don't tell me Flash gets the coin AND the sofa...that would be a post post-modernist tragedy!)
can we retraced everything from this please
Re: i think .......
Author: megan (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: 03-04-05 18:58
what do u think of this before i start the speach mark are him speaking in his head ok
..... shes dead, "what have you done" he wipes his brow and puts the sharp instument back into the case and calmly walks to the therapist office "you made a big mistake why did you do that" he gets in and pours a cup of coffee and wait for the next victim.
and start afresh
Sinister genetic engineer murders co-worker who is trying to expose his work on biological warfare which involves breeding rats that are agressive towards humans and infect them with a fast killing disease when they bite?
urm nice well i think this
phsco no name begens with killing a person after that there his mind says things whilst he commits other murders un till at the end he turn s him self in !!
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