Grit - Littleditty

Thank you ivoryfishbone - it's good to know you enjoyed the imagery in this, i'm finding out this one is more open to different interpretation than i'd realised, glad it communicated to you - i'm still pondering the flow of the second half...hmm... nicky

Hi there, I liked your poem, especially the powerful imagery, the slides, the ice ... All the best Ljiljana

This poem brought out all the anxiety in me. I don't whether this was intended..but then I glimpse the spring and I feel free again. A liberating poem! There's nothing more mind-teasing than the incomprehensible eagerly avowed - Dennet