Solar Days of Fruit

I haven't been on this forum for an age! This is one of mine. To do a link just click in the web address bar and press ctrl and a then ctrl and c and then paste that into your post http://www.abctales.com/story/poetjude/solar-days-fruit Voila! It has some ok images but needs a lot of reworking. It doesn't flow very well, the bitter sweet thing is a bit cliched and the ending is rather lazy but cheers anyway!!!