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Energetic, reads a little
Posted on Fri, 05 Sep 2014
Energetic, reads a little like a script. Great excuse for not being able to hand your work in.
This reminds me of your 'Mining' poem, in that you seem to be showing that attempt in writing to capture a truth. It has a mystical feel, the isdea of huge things beneath the apparently mundane. looking for the gaps. Very thought provoking,...
Energetic, reads a little
Posted on Fri, 05 Sep 2014
Energetic, reads a little like a script. Great excuse for not being able to hand your work in.
Read full commentPosted in Fourth-Dimensional Shit, Tyrone
Wow! this is a stunning use
Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014
Wow! this is a stunning use of language.
Read full commentPosted in After Death
Such an eloquent description
Posted on Wed, 03 Sep 2014
Such an eloquent description of emtional pain.
Read full commentPosted in handholds
Wonderful!
Posted on Wed, 27 Aug 2014
Wonderful!
Read full commentPosted in Spit Out the Bugs in Your Mouth
Delicious. I've come back
Posted on Sat, 23 Aug 2014
Delicious. I've come back with blackberries from my day in the country. I love how you show promise fulfilled and relish the moment.
Read full commentPosted in Blackberry Wine
Sorry about all the typos!
Posted on Thu, 21 Aug 2014
Sorry about all the typos!
Read full commentPosted in Quickening
This reminds me of your
Posted on Thu, 21 Aug 2014
This reminds me of your 'Mining' poem, in that you seem to be showing that attempt in writing to capture a truth. It has a mystical feel, the isdea of huge things beneath the apparently mundane. looking for the gaps. Very thought provoking,...
Read full commentPosted in Quickening
Such a good read! Horrible
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
Such a good read! Horrible but compelling.
Read full commentPosted in Four doors down
So sad. Loss creeps up on us
Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2014
So sad. Loss creeps up on us and takes us unawares. Subtle and moving.
Read full commentPosted in A Flake of Your Life
As beautiful as anything in
Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2014
As beautiful as anything in the Tate Modern (and I do like it in there!)
Read full commentPosted in Another Man's Treasure
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