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I have 247 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1049887 times and 353 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1037 of my 3,542 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1126 votes

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Terence Mullan

 

I shaved my head again today. I shave it every couple of months to disguise the fact that I’m going bald.

1037 of my comments have received 1126 Great Feedback votes

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It's very clever the way you

Posted on Fri, 17 Nov 2023

It's very clever the way you intermingled physical geography with human physical behaviour.

I think there's something special about mountains that brings out the best in us.

They certainly inspired you to write a very enjoyable poem...

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Posted in Analogy Of Adventure

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The Polish poppy cake and the

Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023

The Polish poppy cake and the ability to control what happens in your dreams and hallucinations sound good to me.

However, I'm sorry you're having to endure all this treatment and I'm sorry I didn't wish you a happy birthday on the day....

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Posted in Chemo2 - session 3

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Three neat verses of good

Posted on Fri, 17 Nov 2023

Three neat verses of good advice that fit together extremely well.

The drawing impressed too. I never even managed to draw unemployment benefit. 

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Posted in Lea(r)ning

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Congratulations Demo. A well

Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023

Congratulations Demo. A well deserved accolade.

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Posted in The Party

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Possibly the first tanka I

Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023

Possibly the first tanka I have ever read. Interesting!

You have informed and inspired me.

Thank you very much.

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Posted in Breath

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This is powerful stuff. 

Posted on Thu, 16 Nov 2023

This is powerful stuff. 

Every word and every thought hurts... I get it.

I hope you're okay.

Excellent writing. My kind of poem.

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Posted in Anxiety

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Indeed it does.

Posted on Sat, 11 Nov 2023

Indeed it does.

I'm waiting up for it.

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Posted in May 4th (chapter 3 part 2)

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I'm enjoying this more and

Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023

I'm enjoying this more and more with every episode. Good on you.

But Vanessa should tell her mum to avoid wearing flip flops as they encourage toe clawing. Shoes with a deep toe box will reduce the likelihood of friction on the dorsal...

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 8

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Good stuff Mono.

Posted on Sat, 11 Nov 2023

Good stuff Mono.

You always finish with an 'ooh, what's next?' paragraph.

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Posted in May 4th (chapter 3 part 2)

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I feel sad for this poor

Posted on Wed, 15 Nov 2023

I feel sad for this poor family now.

We have a seven-strong feline death squad that deals with our rodent population. So we never see the little visitors, dead or alive.

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Posted in The after Party

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