Chapter One Complete: The Two Minutes

I have finished the rough draft and rewrite of the first chapter of "Escape From Room 101". I believe I can get a chapter a week finished, if I stay focused. Feedback on this project would be greatly appriciated, please let me know if there is any way I can improve this story!

I will post each chapter after each rewrite - I hope you will enjoy the journey as this story reveals itself! Thank you, everyone!

- J.