Novel 1

This collection is made up of the different chapters of a book I have started writing. It's my first book ever and I really appreciate any feedback. 

The premise may seem cliche, a famous actor falls in love with and  a normal girl (but it isn't the usual cliche of the girl being a clumsy outcast and the guy being way too good for her yet chooses her over everyone else anyway). I am going for somewhat of a tearjerker/romance (not hot and heavy stuff). Anyway, please let me know what you think about what I have so far! Thanks!