hi evryone- im new, how r my poems?
Thu, 2004-10-07 19:33
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hi evryone- im new, how r my poems?
Here is one of my poems- what do u think?
im a 'budding' writer so all opinions are welcome :)
The Rose
In our garden sits a rose,
‘Why is it here?’ No one knows,
It’s dazzling pink petals swaying in the breeze,
Swaying so delicately; sitting amongst the trees.
I know that it’s amazing; I mean, what can I say?
But planted in a Laindon garden degrades it’s angelic way,
The leaves appear to me like an elegant gown,
The sharp thorns remind me of a queen’s glistening crown,
‘So why is this royalty sitting in this place?’
Looking at the dullness through it’s small, helpless face,
The life of this rose is sadly realistic,
It’s living a life that is anachronistic.
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