TOM - Deepak's Mistake

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TOM - Deepak's Mistake

I really liked this - it's the kind of thing you have to read a couple of times, but it's so good. Do you know what I thought? I thought you were going to end the story by saying that the relish turned out to be ordinary, everyday, Heinz relish or something - that's why I thought the old woman was laughing.

Carly Svamvour
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Well, I think I'll go looking for Tom - see if I get him in here to discuss this.
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