Behind the Lines ... Murray

Fish Poets should be catching you rather than the other way around. (smile) This breadmaking poem is certainly a great fresh catch of the new year. Warmly, Jozef

I agree. Just read it. Great stuff. "when the Real Poetry starts."

brilliant eh justyn? now ... the rest of you ... get and read it!

Can't I been locked in my bedroom..limited internet access in here.

"the bread making poems" heh heh heh

just checked back ... poem now has 16 reads and 5 times 5 stars ... (had 3 reads this morning) ... *thinks might have to dust off those invisible cherry x ray specs again ... not used since dogstar's tame*

STILL no cherry *considers going on Poetry Strike*

I agree Fish, so I cherried it. Cheers Em PS: Do you *honestly* think the work cock (koch, whatever) would have a *negative* impact on me cherrying something ;-)

*stops preparing Poetry Strike banners* good call em ... no i think i meant the word cock meant it was poobumwillied and that is why it was way down the list with only three reads ... i expect a cock might ENCOURAGE a cherry in SOME editor's cases ...

:-) Depends how big it is...

Never mind the quality...

...feel the width.

Until emily mentioned it, I hadn't realised there were two kochs in it. what's that called, internal rhyme or summat? Thanks, fish - power to the people.!

Oh, and thanks, Emily, too, of course.

His stories are very good, too...